Although the use of the lighting is attractive, it is important you have a range of image types and particularly on the front cover so you can promote the artist. At the moment it doesn';t read as a MUSIC magazine- the stories on the front are too generic and seem like a lifestyle mag. I din't get a sense of genre. The use of the clock is effective on the contents and shows good ICT skill but there is a lack of content as 21 pages isn't enough. Break up some text on the dps. You need one more original image. Add more to the front cover and have an artist name prominent.
Although the use of the lighting is attractive, it is important you have a range of image types and particularly on the front cover so you can promote the artist. At the moment it doesn';t read as a MUSIC magazine- the stories on the front are too generic and seem like a lifestyle mag. I din't get a sense of genre. The use of the clock is effective on the contents and shows good ICT skill but there is a lack of content as 21 pages isn't enough. Break up some text on the dps. You need one more original image. Add more to the front cover and have an artist name prominent.
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