Megan- the front cover is looking much more proficient as you embed text and image more successfully. You do still need to work on the contents page- change the image as discussed and have a plain background to help the reader navigate the magazine. You also need to have more of a sense of this being a MUSIC magazine across all three pages as the genre of music is not clear.
Megan- the front cover is looking much more proficient as you embed text and image more successfully. You do still need to work on the contents page- change the image as discussed and have a plain background to help the reader navigate the magazine. You also need to have more of a sense of this being a MUSIC magazine across all three pages as the genre of music is not clear.
ReplyDeleteIn addition- the double page spread seems incomplete and needs more text- too sparse- and it lacks some key codes and conventions,
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